The Life Through Books of the Salted Fish Family

Or how to put it, it is the father and mother.

Yan's second thought is in sync with Yan Yushen's.

There is oil and water in the stomach, so it is cold!

He intends to use this as the title, to clarify the center and understand at a glance.

But it’s not okay to write like this, you have to change it.

There is oil in the belly, and it is cold to carry.

Still not good, make it shorter.

There is oil in the abdomen, and it is cold.

Words are not good.

Uh... Carrying the cold is too straightforward.

Full stomach oil, cold resistance!

hiss! Still misses.

Yan Laoer had a flash of inspiration at this moment.

Have!

Don't be afraid of the cold with a full stomach!

appropriate!

Second Yan is satisfied!

I stroked my train of thought and started writing.

First of all, highly affirm the significance of disaster relief, and the wise leadership of the palace.

Afterwards, some small suggestions are made on the current progress and methods of disaster relief.

Take warm clothes as an example. In fact, there is no need to issue new cotton-padded clothes. Old clothes have more comprehensive sizes and can be worn.

Yan Laoer learned before that in addition to cotton, Guanzhou people will also stuff poultry feathers and catkins into it. This is also a good idea. The big family is generous and kind, but sometimes, it is not necessary to do so well .

The pursuit of two points, fast, large quantity.

Insufficient medicinal materials, insufficient charcoal, and how to distribute rice can actually be grouped together.

Yan Lao Er reiterated his central theme here.

People have no oil in their stomachs, so they don't carry cold!

If you eat well and have plenty of oil and water, and you have two or two taels of fat on your body, you can make your cotton clothes thinner, and you don’t need to burn too much charcoal fire, and your body is not easy to get sick, so you don’t need so many medicinal materials...

Don't care if it's reasonable or not, anyway, Yan Laoer just followed it mechanically.

Proposing ideas without context is empty talk.

He is not that kind of person.

Yan Lao Er brought it up, there must be a way.

Going into the mountains to pick meat... digging ice to catch fish...

Go to Beirong!

Nothing is quicker or more immediate than Loot.

The Bei Rong came to grab food, and we went to get meat. It's only fair that we come and go!

Yan Laoer can write well now, what word count should I give, I can’t write too vernacular, forget it!

Don't look at him as a little cowardly in reality, he is full of enthusiasm on paper!

The king of mouth is not bragging!

One-pass analysis of pros and cons.

What weakens the enemy is strengthening oneself!

Grab a bite of meat from Beirong's mouth, and add a little fat to our Guanzhou people.

We take it by surprise, they don't expect it!

Just take advantage of the winter, when the snow is snowing, rush over and kill them by surprise!

If a Bei Rong dies this winter, there will be one less bastard next fall.

eat their cattle and sheep, and leave them no meat to eat.

Take their horses and leave them without horses.

Just think about it, Bei Rong invaded the border with his legs, and we would all be chased to death by them on horseback...

Yan Laoer wrote so excitedly that he almost filled a sheet of paper before realizing that he had written so much!

He hurriedly ended this paragraph, finally realizing the problem of word count.

Thinking that there is still enough time, I will make a draft, write it first, and then start from scratch after I finish writing.

Thinking about it this way, Yan Lao Er didn't have any psychological burden at all.

Directly write the government's division of the affected people.

Big mistake!

How absurd it is to judge people's mourning based on house damage!

After writing this sentence, Yan Er was stunned.

By the way, this is what I wrote?

So awesome!

This sentence is so amazing!

Keep it, keep it, must keep it!

After that, it was what Yan Laoer was good at, the solution.

What's so difficult about it?

Isn't it just a comprehensive rating of household surveys and disaster damage?

The order is wrong, should the house come first? Wrong, people-oriented!

People are ahead, first assess how miserable people are, what kind of assistance they need, and then build a house!

Or separate two departments, one responsible for rescuers, one responsible for repairing houses, parallel management, cross-liaison...

Count the elderly and children at home, count the wounded and sick, whether the labor force has been lost...

In the case of sufficient supplies, relief can be provided indiscriminately.

If the relief supplies are not enough, then the work should be implemented in a more detailed manner. How many cotton clothes are there at home, how much rice, grain and charcoal have been saved...

In the end, Yan Laoer wrote that for sustainable development, it is best not to allow the victims to be rescued unilaterally, but also to allow them to do what they can, such as this household survey, which requires a lot of manpower, so they can be assigned.

Guanzhou is united as one, and under the correct leadership of the Wangfu, it will surely survive the cold disaster smoothly.

Winter goes to spring, and the warm sun blooms.

Yan Laoer closed his pen and looked at the last eight characters with satisfaction.

I was moved: It's so well written!

Yan Lao Er put down his pen, picked up the previous one, and read it from beginning to end.

I muttered to myself.

Really super level performance, not a single typo!

After reading it, he put it down and was about to grind the ink, preparing to retouch and revise a qualified answer sheet.

I didn't want to suddenly stretch out a hand beside me.

Picked up his draft!

Second Yan: ...

First startled, then panicked!

Especially after seeing the back figure in the official uniform, taking his test paper and walking back to the seat in the middle of the hall, the panic reached the extreme.

Examiner... Lord Prefect!

Yan Xiangheng winked anxiously at his second uncle.

Come along!

Yan Lao Er was stunned for a long time before he realized it, and stepped forward nervously, fortunately he did not forget to salute.

The huge man sees very quickly.

When Yan Laoer came close, he had already finished reading it.

He raised his eyes in surprise.

In the previous two rounds, the examinee accomplished it overnight and never revised it. He thought he would do the same this time.

Unexpectedly, there was an oolong, and this was actually a first draft.

The full text... the vernacular.

But if you chew it carefully, it can still be regarded as a... a work to watch.

Forget about the text, just look at the content.

Pragmatic one.

Render the second!

The emotions are full, and the viewers are moved by it, especially the main battle, which is hearty...

When it comes to household registration and rating, it is fresh, thoughtful and practical.

There are a few places in the text that he particularly likes.

For example, the phrase "people-oriented!"

For example, the phrase "determining people's grief based on house damage, how absurd!"

It's the last horoscope, which is a bit vulgar.

It may also be the reason for the first draft, and the book came out as soon as it was so exciting.

Da Da didn't want to waste the examinee's time.

He asked a few questions lightly.

It's about his meat-eating belly that keeps oil in his belly and doesn't chill the cold...

He knows how to dig ice to catch fish, so what's the point of going into the mountains to pick meat?

After hearing that his village lived near the mountain, the snow stopped into the mountain, and many wild animals were found frozen to death...

Pang Daren immediately and sensitively associated with Beirong.

I re-read the passage of Expedition to Beirong.

After a while, he asked about the household survey again.

After Yan Laoer added his answer, Da Daren asked him to go back to his seat.

After that, he remained motionless, staring at the empty table, his eyes flickering non-stop!

...

Yan Lao Er revised the answer sheet again.

Reluctantly deleted a lot of paragraphs.

Finally, the number of words is controlled on one answer sheet.

He is quite satisfied with this condensed version.

What made him dissatisfied was that he could not take the drafts away, and all manuscripts with words in the examination room had to be handed in.

Yan Laoer had a hunch that he might not be able to write such a peak article in his life... I don't know if he can write it silently when he returns home.

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The scumbag Yan Laoer has completed the most important exam in his life, he really tried his best!

Don't be too picky, the house is written to fit the character as much as possible, it won't be too good, it's not that bad, there are still bright spots hahaha~(〃'▽'〃)~