The Eldest Martial Sister Gave Up Treatment

Reading by Volume 480

Lan, and others, and the one-dollar catastrophe.

Here we have to expound on the worldview. The volume [Jiang Yuehe Zhaoren at the beginning of the year] is used to explain the worldview and make the book transition from the early stage to the middle and later stage.

The fairy world in the book is in the center of the world, and the lower world branch is outside the fairy world.

There is no shortage of cultivation resources in this world, and it should be mentioned. I also wrote that East Shenzhou is relatively peaceful, and there are not many murders and treasures. For the immortal cultivators of East Shenzhou at this point in time, the biggest crisis is boundless robbery.

Under the boundless robbery, Tianzun will also fall.

This time, the Infinite Tribulation is different from the previous one, which will be explained later.

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4. Characterization

This is quite difficult. If you can create a good character, the grades of a book are destined to be good, and I am also slowly learning.

My suggestion is that when a new character is introduced, the conclusion should not be made in the first chapter, but after the character is gradually developed.

It doesn't matter if the character is sick, because this character may be sick——

Heart disease!

But to say that he has no brains, it is best to say it after watching a paragraph and say it with reason, because you may not understand the experience of this character at all.

Whether it is brainless or not depends on whether it is logically consistent in this role.

The role of comments is to point out their own views, most of them are well-intentioned, support the author, and hope that the book will be better, but some comments will really affect the performance of a book.

At the beginning of my book, about 300,000 words, someone came up to say [the plot has collapsed], and I typed for a long time and didn't know how to reply.

I also confidently said that the next plot will definitely be how it is, and I don't know how to reply. It really doesn't look like this.

I can't write like this in other books. This one must be like this. I don't share the same brain with other authors.

Spoiler, no.

Without spoilers, there will really be new readers who will write letters, and then the subscription will be gone. The plate of the text is too small. If the readers leave, it will be difficult to add new people.

Probably just delete the post.

But you generally can't delete posts, because there are very few people who are very sincere and insist on their own opinions. If you delete their comments, you will feel guilty. What’s more, they started scolding directly, scolding in comments, scolding in private messages, and I didn’t read all of the posts. There were more than 80,000 posts in total. There is talk of how much nt or something to write into a text.

There is no chaos in the comment area of this book, but there are still a lot of influential comments. I basically did not delete it, because I was afraid of being scolded for deleting it.

No way, glass heart, being scolded will be depressed for several days.

There are far more supporters, but it's still uncomfortable.

Thanks to those who have been subscribing.

Thanks also to the people who read a bunch of whining words and saw it here.

to repeat -

[The main characters in this book do not have knives, this is not a lie]

After chatting for a long time, when I go to pick up a courier, I will come back and update today's first chapter, 4000 words, and 3000 at night.

Chapter 15 You're Enchanted! 4k

For ordinary people, all they see is the interlacing of light and shadow.

Under the dark clouds, the purple electric light and the white sword light strife endlessly.

Like entangled snakes.

It doesn't look that good anyway.

Full of weirdness.

Just looking at it is terrifying.

People in Gucheng County have never seen such a terrifying astronomical phenomenon.

The black cloud overwhelms the city and wants to destroy it.

The dark cloud became darker and darker, and in the end it completely merged into the sky, like a black breach.

The rain seemed to burst out suddenly, but now it is like a rushing waterfall.

slam-la-

In a short time, the river that passed through the city was full to overflowing, and it would not be long before the entire Gucheng County was flooded.

The air was damp and terrifyingly wet.

The happy people standing outside the Cao Mansion could no longer be happy at this time.

If this goes on, they will all die!

The bone-chilling chill made the entertainers huddle into a ball.

Now all they have in their minds is one word—

"The water is too cold, the head is too cold."

It really doesn't matter at all.

Bai Lian's expression was slightly dignified.

Her air became an invisible wall, covering the entire Gucheng County.

After a while, Gucheng County finally got rid of the flooded ending.

The rushing water rolled down from all sides, but when it fell halfway, it was swayed into a mist of water by Bai Lian's spiritual power.

then.

As the battle in the sky became more and more intense, Gucheng County suddenly turned into a fairyland dancing in the white mist, and the light from the battle was as gorgeous as that.

Bai Lian saw it clearly.

That swordsman does have the capital to be proud of.

With only two swords, he forced Jiaolong to the left and right.

The purple electric light that slid down the invisible wall was clearly a rain of burning blood.

If this continues, Jiaolong will be beheaded by that swordsman.

But there's something wrong with that.

In Bai Lian's memory, Jiaolong shouldn't have died so early.

After all, the Fifth Junior Sister was only ten years old at this time, and it was still seven years before she joined the Duxianmen in the game.

The death of the dragon,

That's in ten years.

Maybe it has some special life-saving means.

Or maybe it was because this battle didn't exist, and she flapped her wings and shifted the future.