Rebirth of the God-level Xueba

Chapter 218 Simple Composition

Tu Xian stayed in West Fort Middle School as long as possible, but in May, he could no longer take a vacation, so he had to go back dispirited.

He was unhappy because he felt that the opportunity was wasted. During his one-month stay at West Fort Middle School, Tu Xian completed one and a half papers, and even got a second author on Yang Rui's new paper.

Now that he is gone, most of the second author will be given to Yao Yue and Wei Zhenxue.

Tu Xian was quite envious of this. After all, they are all foreign journals. Even if a second author is named, it is still useful when evaluating job titles. Maybe it is not small.

But he had been away from school long enough, that is, a state unit like the school, that allowed him to take a month's sick leave, and he didn't have to take out the sick leave certificate immediately, but it would be too long.

After Tu Xian planned to go back, he would find a doctor he knew to give an explanation for recuperation, and reimburse the fare by the way.

He had a paper published, enough for school.

Tu Xian's departure from Xibao Middle School did not affect Yang Rui's work, because Yang Rui had already shifted his work center to the college entrance examination.

There are still two months left, and the actual review time is more than one month. Not to mention Yang Rui himself, the students in the Rui Xue group have reached the final sprint stage.

Of course, sprinting does not use all your strength.

On the contrary, sprints pay more attention to efficiency, and it takes a limited time to complete unlimited work. If people are exhausted, it is not good news for the exam.

Yang Rui handed over the experiment he was doing to Wei Zhenxue, still asked Yao Yue and Lu Zhi to be the experiment assistants, returned to the classroom by himself, and gave an English composition class to the students in Hongrui class.

Not only Hong Rui's class, but students from other classes also moved their benches to listen to Yang Rui's lecture.

Since this year, the score of English in the college entrance examination has increased from 50 points to 100 points. This is a huge increase and a huge crisis.

For the students of township middle schools, it is similar to use bad news to describe it.

Among other things, West Fort Middle School was the way it was before, and there was no decent English teacher there.

Even in Xi County, there are no English teachers with professional background.

In such an environment, students who can learn dumb English are already among the dragons and phoenixes.

The composition question is naturally the most difficult part of the English test paper. The English teacher Yang Rui invited couldn't speak well, so Yang Rui went to the battle in person.

Standing in the middle of the podium, Yang Rui asked calmly, "What kind of English composition do you think is the best?"

"The words are beautiful and the language is fluent." Xu Jing replied with the description in the textbook.

Wang Guohua said carelessly: "The grammar is good."

"There is something to be said." Li Xuegong raised his head slightly.

Yang Rui smiled and said: "A good English essay is like this, a good English essay is not."

"why?"

"Because you can't write well. In your opinion, given the current situation in China, how many students can write English compositions that are beautiful, smooth, grammatical, and meaningful?"

The students shook their heads.

Yang Rui knew that there were such students. Even in China in the 1980s, there were still many students who had received good English education, but the number was too small.

It can't be compared with the tens of thousands of English N-level, TOEFL and IELTS students in later generations.

There is no need for Yang Rui to discuss this issue in depth. On the podium, he said with his familiar expressions and movements: "What kind of form should the English composition we are pursuing now be? I think the simplest one is fine. Speaking clearly is the first level to express the meaning clearly, and the second level is not to make mistakes, and the first level must be subordinate to the second level, do you understand what it means?"

"First of all, don't make mistakes."

"That's right, when you encounter a sentence you want and don't know how to answer it, use the simplest one."

"The score will be lower."

"Mistakes must be deducted points, and one point will be deducted for one mistake. How many mistakes can be deducted for a composition of yours? The writing is beautiful, the grammar is smooth, and there are not many points in total. Even if you don't give up on this part, mistakes and omissions It’s full, so don’t even think about taking it.” Yang Rui’s tone gradually became severe, and he continued: “If you don’t understand, then remember a slogan, simplicity is beauty, say it all over again…”

"Simple is beautiful……"

Yang Rui quickly ended the lecture indoctrination, and let the students start practicing pens.

In fact, since a few months ago, he started asking students to prepare English compositions. At that time, his main method was to recite.

The recitation of new concept English is the first step, and the recitation of some special example sentences is the second step.

Through these methods, more than half of the students in the Hongrui class can pass the English mark, and most of the remaining students did not recite seriously.

Even in the face of the college entrance examination, continuous reciting is still tiresome. It is normal for some students to fail to persevere or choose other breakthrough points.

There are seven subjects in the college entrance examination, and there are only a small number of people who can review each subject perfectly.

However, in May, the basic review is useless.

Yang Rui read their compositions in class one by one, and then corrected them in class.

This time, he didn't care whether the students' language was good or not, he just found out the mistakes and marked them with a red pen, and they would deduct points for it.

Most of the students will be deducted more than 10 points, that is to say, if they write an English composition with hundreds of words, they will make more than ten mistakes.

This is already better than Yang Rui imagined.

Students in other classes are also taken care of by teachers, but the native English teacher of West Fort Middle School is slower in correcting their compositions.

Yang Rui walked slowly to Liu Shan's side.

As a student, Liu Shan studies very hard, and her talent is quite good.

However, she somewhat pursued the meaning of being better, and made no fewer mistakes than other students.

Yang Rui had to specifically explain: "Any wrongly written sentence will not be judged as a good sentence. The result of your doing so can only be a reduction of points, not a bonus."

"However, if it's all simple sentences, points will be deducted."

"Two points are deducted, maybe three points, but you can lose 7 points because of it, or earn it?"

"You taught us to recite new concept English, can't we use it?"

"If you want to use it, I suggest you use the original sentence." Yang Rui didn't say the words with poor foundation, but directly said how to do it, saying: "Modifying the sentences in it will change your sense of language, so the correct way is up to you to decide." If the sentence is correct, you use it, otherwise, you don’t use it.”

"If you do this, how many points will you get for the composition?"

"It's about 10 points more than before." This is not a small improvement. For the college entrance examination, 10 points will enter two completely different schools.

Liu Shan nodded slightly, and continued to write the composition.

Yang Rui inspected the time for two classes before finishing correcting the compositions for all the students. When he returned to the room, he spread out his homework and started writing English compositions.

If you write too many academic papers, the language sense of normal composition will change, and Yang Rui doesn't want to deduct points for this.

Teacher Jing Yulan is still waiting for him in Beijing.

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