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? How to write the beginning of a tragedy fascinating, and are interested in continuing to read it?

I don’t know how many writers have thought about this issue. When he first decided to write the beginning of "Shishi Shishi" as the tragedy of Feng Xingyun’s final battle, Lu Yang didn’t consider this issue, but just wanted to follow him. Write it down in a consistent style.

　　 Later, when he wrote more than 3,000 words, his brows suddenly frowned, paused to continue writing, and began to read the more than 3,000 words he had written from the perspective of a reader. After reading it, his brow furrowed even tighter.

　　Because he suddenly found that writing in the usual way of writing, this kind of beginning is really unattractive.

　　 is the beginning of the tragedy. If there are no other elements that attract readers, how many readers will continue to follow after reading such an opening?

　　 Maybe most of his **** book fans will chase, but what about new readers?

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　　 If a writer wants to be prosperous and popular, he must not only try his best to capture the hearts of old fans, but also constantly attract new readers.

　　 But if the beginning of "The Age of Mentors" is completely unsuccessful, it is just a tragedy written in a proper way, without doubt, many new readers will be shut out.

　　Like original space-time Landi Meichen’s "Master Loneliness", it is regarded as a classic by countless people. Known as a classic masterpiece of stream of consciousness, it also has countless readers who give it extremely low evaluation. Many people even bluntly said that this book is just the beginning and can't stand it.

The reason. The big factor is at the beginning of this book.

　　 The beginning of this book has a long storyline without any highlights, and it even tastes the same to read.

　　 A book fan who liked it once laughed and said that this is a test set by Lan Di Meichen for readers. Those who cannot pass the test at the beginning are not qualified to see the excitement behind it.

　　 If the beginning of this book is as exciting as its mid to late period, its popularity and evaluation will surely far exceed its original version.

　　 Not to mention, is that a test set by Lan Di Meichen for readers? At least Lu Yang has no intention of setting any test for his readers at the beginning. He wanted to write according to his own ideas, but he would not be troubled by the readers.

　　 Therefore, in the first two chapters, it uses some novel settings as a selling point to attract readers.

　　 These novel settings may not be his first creation, but most of the readers have never seen it before. As an old writer for two generations, he still has this confidence.

for example. The first scene at the beginning of "The Age of Mentors" is the plot of Feng Xingyun handing in time after receiving the task.

　　 "Hand in time" is difficult to understand at first glance, but "time" can still be handed in?

　　 Lu Yang once watched an American movie. The name is "Time Administration".

　　 The story background of this movie is set in the future world. In the setting of this movie, the currency of the future world. It's no longer money, but time. Everyone has a chip implanted in his arm by the Time Administration from birth. The person’s time is stored in the chip, and the time stored in the chip is like everyone’s money in the bank.

　　 Different from the normal monetary system, the Time Administration quantifies your lifespan in the form of numbers at the beginning of each person’s birth.

　　Usually, everyone needs the time in the chip to buy, for example, 10 minutes to buy a hamburger.

　　In the setting of this movie, in the future world, mankind has overcome all diseases and decrypted the secret that human genes age with the passage of time.

　　 So, in theory, everyone can live forever.

　　 But if everyone truly achieves immortality, then the constant birth of babies will continue to expand the total human population and eventually exhaust all resources.

　　 Therefore, even if everyone can live forever in theory, someone must die.

　　 The purpose of the establishment of the Time Administration is to let people who spend all the time in the chip end their lives.

　　 This kind of termination is very cruel. It is obvious that a teenager is only a teenager. As long as the time in the chip reaches zero, the whole person will immediately die like a power-off electrical appliance.

　　 When Lu Yang saw this movie by chance, he felt very amazing!

　　 is not amazed by its plot, but the setting of this movie.

　　The more I think about it, the more I feel that if humans can really decrypt all the secrets of genetic disease and aging in the future world, then an agency like the Time Administration is really likely to appear.

　　The only people who can live forever are those rich men who can never run out of time. The bottom humans work hard, but cannot enjoy the eternal benefits brought by technology. They can only die when time runs out.

　　 Lu Yang believes that most of the online readers have not seen this movie. Therefore, at the beginning of "The Age of Shishi", Lu Yang used the plot of the time before Feng Xingyun's mission to introduce this setting.

　　 Lu Yang believes that such a novel setting can at least capture the hearts of readers who have not read "Time Administration" in a short period of time.

　　 In "Time Administration", there is no plot that soldiers must hand in time before they go on a mission. Lu Yang borrowed some of the settings of "Time Administration", and at the same time extended new settings from the original settings.

This new setting is that in the future world, the universal currency of mankind is time. In order to ensure that the soldiers performing the mission are not afraid of death, every soldier who performs the task must have the absolute value in the chip before the mission. Most of the time is turned in, and only the time specified by the task is in the chip.

Once soldiers have deserted or defected during the mission, once the time in the chip is 0, the soldiers who escaped or defected will immediately end their lives. Only the soldiers who actively complete the task return to the barracks and get back the time that was turned in. In order to continue to live.

　　 This is Lu Yang's first selling point in the first two chapters of "The Age of Shishi".

　　 Besides, there are a few more points.

　　 The emotion that runs through the entire plot of Feng Xingyun's final battle is the second point.

　　 The same plot, writing with emotions, and writing without emotions, will give readers a completely different reading experience.

In order to give readers an immersive feeling, Lu Yang spent a few hours brewing feelings before writing these two chapters, and then deleted, modified, and cut some details that affect the emotional coherence of the entire drama before they were finalized. .

　　 The third point is the novel mecha setting.

　　 As the beginning of a book, we must give highlights!

　　As a mecha-themed work, the settings of the mecha must naturally be brilliant. In the first two chapters of "Era of Mentors", there were only a few characters in the scene, but Lu Yang carefully designed the mechas controlled by the Jiuxing Ace Mentors who appeared on the scene.

　　Such as Feng Xingyun's Sanxi Mecha! Just like Transformers, land, water, and sky, as long as one transformation, you can immediately adapt to the battle of these three environments.

　　 In Lu Yang's setting, Feng Xingyun's amphibious mecha is tiger-shaped on land. This is also the appearance of the mecha when he first appeared on the battlefield.

　　 is on all fours, with good teeth, sharp claws and steel whip tail, open mouth can spray laser, can also form tiger roar, use sound waves to interfere with the operating system of mobile phone armor.

After 　　 is transformed, it can become an eight-legged spider. Each spider has an energy turbine on the bottom of its foot. Once the energy turbine is activated, the eight-legged spider can not only travel quickly underwater, but also walk on the surface of the water with its feet.

　　 The last change was a fallen angel with four wings.

Of the eight legs of an eight-legged spider, four become wings, and the other four become hands and feet.

　　 This is the mecha set by Lu Yang for Feng Xingyun.

　　 Feng Xingyun’s opponents Augustus, Ronagar, Bylot and Yuan Shangzhenyi in the final battle, Lu Yang also designed mechas that are enough to make people shine.

　　 For example, Augustus, this big blonde man, the mech designed by Lu Yang is the ultimate model of the knight series.

　　 Lu Yang Looking at all the mecha works, the mechas have no mounts.

　　 But in Lu Yang's setting, the Cavaliers series of mechas all have mounts.

　　This kind of mecha is a combination of energy mecha and colonial mecha.

　　 Augustus’s mount, the Flame Treader, is a type of energy mecha driven by energy and chips. It can charge on land or fight in the sky after activating the golden flames under the horses’ hoof.

　　 The mecha he wears is a colonized mecha. It is not big and is driven by mental power. When taken off, it is a suitcase. Once driven, it quickly covers his body surface.

　　 Bylot's mecha is different. His mecha is controlled by a sub-mother.

　　This kind of mecha has two molecular mother bodies. When controlled, Baylot enters the mother body. The mother body uses local networking. All the commands of the mother body can be transmitted to the other child mechas.

　　The stronger the mentor~www.wuxiaspot.com~, the more sub-body mechas can be remotely controlled.

　　 Bylot, as the Nine Star Ace Master, through the mother body, there are nine sub-body mechas that can be controlled at the same time, and the nine drones are controlled by him alone.

　　 The last Shinyori Harakami took a different route.

　　 Her mecha is the most traditional human-type mecha, but it is characterized by the human-type mechas she controls, which is a cut of the mainstream human-type mechas.

The mainstream humanoid mechas are not only equipped with cold weapons such as knives and swords, but also equipped with hot weapons such as laser guns and tracking missiles. The humanoid mechas controlled by the original Shinyori are only equipped with the highest strength. War knife.

　　 Just like the food carving industry, there are genres that make good use of dozens of tools for carving and two genres that use one knife without any other tools.

　　 Harakami Shinyori's swordsmanship, all battles are based on a sword in his hand.

　　 The setting Lu Yang gave her was a combination of mecha and Guwu. (To be continued...)