Rebirth 2003

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　　 Day and night alternate, time flies.

　　 In a blink of an eye, it has been more than a week since the Shao Dahai incident. There are many injustices in this world, and only time is fair! It will not slow down your progress just because you are a big man, nor will it let you live your life in an instant because you are down on the street. It will not be because Lu Yang has recently finished "The Master" to speed up the flow, allowing Lu Yang to fight for the new book immediately, nor because Shao Dahai is ruined and lives worse than death, and will slowly pass by, so that he is always in public opinion. swirl.

　　 After more than a week, Lu Yang finally felt that he had enough rest, ready to put his mind on the new book.

　　 Before the birth of each work, there were several changes in its draft, at least in Lu Yang's case.

　　 If you want to ask why, there is actually no big reason. It's just that he suddenly felt that the name "Shishi Times" was more pleasing to the eye than the words "Shishi" and felt more sensible.

　　Creation is a process entirely based on feelings. What every creator wants to do most is to write the most sensational story in his mind.

　　 The content of the story is so, so is the name of the story.

　　 Even at the beginning of this manuscript, Lu Yang still feels unsatisfactory looking at it today, including the introduction!

　　 Then. He thought about it for a while, and then began to revise it.

　　 Title: "The Age of Shishi"

　　 Type: Sci-Fi Mecha

　　 Author: Wen Chou

　　 Introduction: 8482 AD. Human footprints have spread across seven galaxies, including the Milky Way, as early as the 21st century. Human beings have imaginary all kinds of aliens. Many people think that human beings are a low-level race in the universe. If they encounter an alien civilization, human civilization is likely to be fragmented and genocide.

　　 And it turns out that the most dangerous race in this universe, at least so far, is humans!

　　Before the 21st century, humans regarded cannibal beasts as monsters, and all races against humans. Defined as a demon! But what about the facts?

　　 Humans eat everything they can eat! All animals and plants, whether poisonous or non-toxic, harmful or harmless, are treated as a plate of Chinese food. Every human being will eat countless lives in his lifetime.

　　 Such a human being who has eaten everything in the world has a strong sense of crisis early on, and is always worried that one day, it will be annihilated by an alien civilization. As a result, when humans entered the interstellar age, when they really encountered one after another alien civilizations, they found that none of the alien races were as cruel as humans. So expandable.

　　 Looking at the seven galaxies, mankind is invincible!

　　 So the warlike human regime began to split. Once again enter the era of war and chaos in which the world is united for a long time and must be divided.

　　 The top arms that once swept all alien civilizations-divisions, began to be used in civil wars.

our story. Beginning in the battle of Longji Mountain in the Golden Lion galaxy Gutere Star Yanzhou, this is the last battle of the Jiuxing Ace Master Feng Xingyun! His opponents are Augustus, Ronagar, Bylot and Harakami Mae, who are also nine-star ace mentors...

　　……

　　 This is probably the longest introduction to a new book that Lu Yang has ever written. reason?

Again!

feel!

　　 He felt that writing this way had more feelings, so he wrote it like this.

In Lu Yang’s previous manuscript, the beginning of "Shishi" was less than a hundred words, so the protagonist appeared on the scene. It was completely written in mainstream online texts. The protagonist was drawn out as soon as possible, and the protagonist’s identity, image, and skills were explained as quickly as possible. Wait for the things that should be explained, so that readers can take on the role as soon as possible.

　　 But today Lu Yang wanted to change this beginning.

　　 After squinting his eyes for more than half an hour, Lu Yang decided to write a tragic hero at the beginning of the story-the last battle of the Jiuxing Ace Master Feng Xingyun.

　　 is also his pinnacle battle.

　　 In this battle, Feng Xingyun's fame stunts will bloom for the last time, and it will become a must-have ever since.

　　 Lu Yang estimates that if he writes this way, the actual playing time should be in Chapter 3. If the number of words in the first two chapters is more than 6,000 words.

　　 If the first two chapters have 3,000 characters per chapter, the protagonist's playing time will be in Chapter 5.

　　 is written by another writer. Except for the top **** at the same level as Lu Yang now, even if it is written by a first-line god, it is likely to be on the street.

　　 But Lu Yang feels that he doesn't need to think so much now. There are several great gods with stable gods in the memory of Central Plains Time and Space, and the new book begins to take an unusual path.

　　 But their new books are still very popular, and there are still a lot of readers who follow their new books.

　　 There is only one reason for this—their godhead has become so great, and no matter how they start their new book, there will be no shortage of readers to read it.

　　 Most readers believe in their abilities and have enough patience with their new books. Even if the first few chapters are awkward, they will continue to read them, believing that their works will become more and more exciting in the future.

　　It can be said that such a wayward way of writing is the patent of the top god!

　　 Some top gods wrote this way, maybe just to play their personality, but most of the big gods do this for only one purpose-to fully pave the way for new stories.

　　 This is an impetuous era!

This impetuosity is very obvious in the online text industry. As mentioned above, the first three thousand words of the online text must have a selling point that can impress readers, even less than 1,000 words, or even less than 300 words. A proof of the impetuousness of this industry.

In the Internet era, although there are a lot of readers, the readers can choose from too many works. It is impossible for any reader to read all the books in the library of a website. There are hundreds of thousands of authors who work hard every day. The number of updated words far exceeds the number that any reader can read every day.

　　 Because of this, most readers have no patience with the new book, and just read it for a few minutes. If you don't see something that appeals to you, you will immediately abandon your book. Instead, look for other works.

　　 Under such a big environment, more than 90% of the authors are forced to get the story into the topic as soon as possible. As a result, the law that the first few hundred words will impress readers is gradually formed.

　　 Such a law never exists in traditional literary works. This is probably one of the reasons why traditional literati despise online literary works.

　　 It’s just that, from the perspective of the structure of the story, in fact, at the beginning of the story, it is easier to produce high-quality products if there are enough slow and hot texts!

　　 Because there is enough foreshadowing, the plot behind. It is easier to form tension!

　　 What is story tension?

　　 Use a popular example to describe it!

　　 Cats eat fish, dogs eat meat, and Ultraman fights small monsters. For cats, dogs and Ultraman, it should be very happy things, right? This kind of happiness can be compared to mainstream fast-paced web articles.

　　 So, how can you compare slow-hot works?

A group of cats are eating carrots, and only one cat can eat fish every day; a group of dogs are eating vegetables, only one dog has meat to eat; the rest of the Ultraman family can only be three good students in peace, only An Ultraman can beat small monsters in threes and fives.

　　There is contrast. Will appear to be happier!

　　 This is part of the tension of the story!

　　 The fast-paced Shuangwen, simply put, it is just for the sake of being cool and cool, and it is constantly pursuing one cool story after another. The slow-hot works, because of the large number of plots, at first glance. It doesn't seem to be very cool, but savor it carefully. You will find that this refreshing feeling is not bad at all. Even when the plot broke out in the middle and late stages, it was so cool that people couldn't restrain themselves, and they couldn't wait to dance.

　　 Lu Yang intends to use this technique to write this time. It should be said that there are two purposes.

　　 One, naturally, is to pave the way for the plot behind and make the story more exciting.

　　 And secondly, I want to test the extent of my current Godhead and how many readers will patiently follow up his new book.

　　Every writer wants to prove his ability and value in addition to earning more manuscript fees.

　　 And how do you prove your ability and value?

　　 manuscript fee is only one aspect, the most important thing is the approval of the book fans!

　　 A boring codeword career, when someone is accompanied and cheered, the codeword career will not appear so boring.

　　 It can be said that this attempt is Lu Yang's willfulness for a while.

　　 To make the story more exciting, but also to test my godhead.

　　 At the beginning of the original manuscript, he was temporarily moved to the back and rewritten the first and second chapters, both of which were large chapters with more than 6,000 words.

　　……

　　 Chapter One, Deeply Encircled

　　 This chapter is very sad, written by Lu Yang, and it is not written in the superficial way of web writing.

　　 The superficial representation is written by Lu Yang himself.

　　 He looked at most of the web articles and found that most of the web articles paid too much attention to the advancement of the plot, and gave up many detailed descriptions and the rendering of the overall atmosphere.

Often simply explain the place and time, describe the surrounding scenery in a few words, and then enter the plot. Obviously it should be a very sad plot, because the atmosphere is not rendered enough, the author wrote it in one stroke when he wrote it, and when the reader reads it, there is not much sadness. a feeling of.

　　 Lu Yang wrote the first two chapters as a student, no! It's far beyond the state of writing when he was a student. He spent more than half an hour, half-squinting his eyes~www.wuxiaspot.com~ to let himself into the scene he had conceived, and meticulously sculpt the story in his heart. Every detail of, especially because of personal grievances, the superior commander plunged his nine-star ace mentor into the sorrow of the local four nine-star ace mentors.

　　 He has deeply substituted himself into the role of Feng Xingyun, imagining in his mind that he has fought hundreds of times to kill the enemy, but the superior commander ignores his feats, has fornication with the enemy, and engulfed him in all the details.

　　 If you want to make readers feel the same, and feel as sad and angry as Feng Xingyun, only the author feels that way in the first place!

　　 With this thought, it took Lu Yang an entire afternoon to write the six thousand characters in Chapter 1. After finishing writing, he closed his eyes and leaned back on the back of his chair, his expression extremely sad.

　　 Like an actor who has been too deep into the play, he can't get out of the play for a long time, and is still immersed in Feng Xingyun's emotions. (A good event for pie in the sky, cool mobile phone waiting for you! Follow it~ Click/Chinese website official account (WeChat add friend-add official account-enter it), participate now! Everyone has a prize, pay attention now WeChat public account!) (to be continued...)

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